29 July 2009

SPEECHLESS

Tell me wordlessly
explain what you want done
Show me silently
You'll take what I give

Incline your head
incline your hands
light in your eyes
makes no demands
But speaks of dreams
and can't hold still
because they see
they'll be fulfilled

jim aka cygnus

Slainte

Cygnus

12 comments:

Kyddryn said...

Oh...beautiful, Sir...

Shade and Sweetwater,
K

Not The Rockefellers said...

And you said you had nuthin'
more of that nuthin' please...

Peace - Rene

Felinae said...

Cygnus...

Absolutely heartfelt beauty.

Love~n~Hugs
Felinae

Sylvia said...

Well, Love needs no words... Beautiful.

Shadow said...

oh wow. nice. actions do speak louder than words...

Not The Rockefellers said...

"Will you just stand still?"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PXhJ95_1I48

Sarah said...

Oh hon..that was beautiful!! Reached right in and touched me!!! Wonderful!
Sarah

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

And then, when he repeats her question, "What are you doing?", and she echoes his response..."Will you just stand still?"...

YOU, Lady, may have all of the "nuthin' else" you desire.
Thank you for your... well, pretty much for YOU, and yours, and for being such a happy voice, Lady Rene.

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

Ladies Kyddry, Sylvia, Shadow, and Felinae...

The best compliments a poet can receive are those that are fully expressed in minimal wording... Thank you Ladies. I'm glad the piece touched you in such a way.
Thanks.

Cygnus

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

And Lady Sarah!

Glad you got "touched", Lady! ha!

Ever my intent, in all honesty... to 'touch' all of you I can! ha!

With the tongue, of course!

[Well now, that didn't make matters any less amorous, now did it?
{HA! NEVER my intent! har har!}

Slainte!

C.

Not The Rockefellers said...

Well then, Sir, I got plenty of nuthin'...and nuthin's plenty for me..

Peace - Rene

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

Okay Lady Rene,
I'm 50-50 with ya here...

'I got plenty of nuthin' ' meself...

But... it AIN'T enough.

Where be the compromise?!?

LOL!