Wanting it too much
aching so severely
fearing I might
drive away the actuality
a hungry look
superseding the calm confidence needed
to captivate
Hope lies only in the chance that
certainty be simultaneous,
leave no room for,
and push into the past
any doubt
jim aka Cygnus
Slainte, folks.
Cygnus
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6 comments:
I love hearing your poetry, my sweet friend, another hauntingly captivating piece straight from your heart.
Love~n~Hugs
~Felinae~
Powerful, Sir...and evocative.
Shade and Sweetwater,
K
Stay cool, Cyg....
As cool as your poetry :)
Peace - Rene
Hey, friend! Don't you want the award I gave you?! Big smile.
ooooo, very nice. instant, severely, yip, sounds like something i've felt before.
Thanks, Shadow!
Sylvia-- I'm coming right over! ha!
Lady Rocks... YOU Rocks!
Thank you Lady K...
Lady Felinae-- Glad you enjoyed...
Thanks a bunch for the feedback, folks!
Cygnus
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