04 August 2009

Instant

Wanting it too much
aching so severely
fearing I might
drive away the actuality
a hungry look
superseding the calm confidence needed
to captivate

Hope lies only in the chance that
certainty be simultaneous,
leave no room for,
and push into the past
any doubt


jim aka Cygnus

Slainte, folks.

Cygnus

6 comments:

Felinae said...

I love hearing your poetry, my sweet friend, another hauntingly captivating piece straight from your heart.

Love~n~Hugs
~Felinae~

Kyddryn said...

Powerful, Sir...and evocative.

Shade and Sweetwater,
K

Not The Rockefellers said...

Stay cool, Cyg....
As cool as your poetry :)

Peace - Rene

Sylvia said...

Hey, friend! Don't you want the award I gave you?! Big smile.

Shadow said...

ooooo, very nice. instant, severely, yip, sounds like something i've felt before.

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

Thanks, Shadow!

Sylvia-- I'm coming right over! ha!

Lady Rocks... YOU Rocks!

Thank you Lady K...

Lady Felinae-- Glad you enjoyed...

Thanks a bunch for the feedback, folks!

Cygnus