Destination
sweet, steady and
soft coming down
your warm embrace
this summer sound
with even swish
you wash across
the Earth like lif-
ted albatross
and heavier still
you stream down now--
a chilling thrill
a seeping plow
into the Earth
to find all Root
and add your Girth
to Leaf and Fruit
jMc aka Cygnus
Slainte
11 August 2009
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This is beautiful, Sir...
Let's go run around in it :)
Peace - Rene
I'm with Mizz Rene - let's go frolic in the soaking rain...
Shade and Sweetwater,
K
outstanding!
Exquisite!
Hugs~n~Love
~Felinae~
Ladies K and Rene--
Y'all are still inside?!?
Shadow-- outstanding! in the rain! yes! thanks for theme continuity!
Lady Felinae--
Kesundheit...
No, dude, outside..green silk shirt :D
Peace - Rene
And me all bare-chested, rivulets needing a damming...
That Cloth? mind if I...
Considering how it just finally started raining here in the greater Seattle area (following a record-breaking dry spell) . . . it feels to me as though your poem could be completely all about RAIN.
~ SunTiger
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