20 May 2009

TIME SHARED

The moon we view in unison

it's light we share

Frowns

because unison, share

are only adjectives

describing hope for a future

under the same sky

not oceans apart


j. aka Cygnus...

8 comments:

Felinae said...

Very beautiful, Cygnus, but you must know the heart does not recognize distance. It only recognizes what simply is...

Smiles~Felinae~

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

Yes ma'am..

I just desire the distance NOT BE.. 'S what this poem [is trying to] say...

Not The Rockefellers said...

She makes his light glow and radiate beyond his earthy confines

He makes her shine and realize she is not just of water She is so much more

The distance brought her there

Peace - Rene

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

Lady D.

pondering...

Very Nice Words from you, ma'am...

Thank you...

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

Typo-- Lady R...

Some reason I had the name "dawn" in mind...;P

RachelW said...

It seems as if the moon has been doing some special rounds lately. I spotted her loveliness here, just now:

http://poemflesh2.blogspot.com/2009/05/poemflesh_21.html

Cygnus MacLlyr said...

So She has, Lady Rachel... which remindeth me-- I got a post to do...
Thanks for the words...
Glad you saw... Her...

Kyddryn said...

My friend K, the sister of my heart, often calls me from wherever she is on the road and says "I love you under this moon..." as we both stand and stare, wherever we are, and know we're together in the silver light...

Shade and Sweetwater,
K