The moon we view in unison
it's light we share
Frowns
because unison, share
are only adjectives
describing hope for a future
under the same sky
not oceans apart
j. aka Cygnus...
it's light we share
Frowns
because unison, share
are only adjectives
describing hope for a future
under the same sky
not oceans apart
j. aka Cygnus...
8 comments:
Very beautiful, Cygnus, but you must know the heart does not recognize distance. It only recognizes what simply is...
Smiles~Felinae~
Yes ma'am..
I just desire the distance NOT BE.. 'S what this poem [is trying to] say...
She makes his light glow and radiate beyond his earthy confines
He makes her shine and realize she is not just of water She is so much more
The distance brought her there
Peace - Rene
Lady D.
pondering...
Very Nice Words from you, ma'am...
Thank you...
Typo-- Lady R...
Some reason I had the name "dawn" in mind...;P
It seems as if the moon has been doing some special rounds lately. I spotted her loveliness here, just now:
http://poemflesh2.blogspot.com/2009/05/poemflesh_21.html
So She has, Lady Rachel... which remindeth me-- I got a post to do...
Thanks for the words...
Glad you saw... Her...
My friend K, the sister of my heart, often calls me from wherever she is on the road and says "I love you under this moon..." as we both stand and stare, wherever we are, and know we're together in the silver light...
Shade and Sweetwater,
K
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